Dreams Come True

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Is 25 April, 2021 and yet I'm hav another horrifying dream. I was doing my best to forget about the dream but there was man showing up in my dream with a knife and it just kept coming on.

I realized that even though I remembered what happened in the dream, there was no way I could stop it from happening because I didn't see the man's face in the dream. I was scared of telling people about the dream because no one would believe me.

“Noo, I can't do it.” I said as I shut the door behind. I was holding a torch and a short rod in the other hand, but I just can't do it.

I put on my night wear as I lied on my bed. My mom was away and I was all alone in the house. Being alone was really scary but I was get used to it. The lights were always on.

I sat in front of the TV, watching the early morning news which wasn't good for the morning, but it displayed dead body of a man on it. The man was a father of two kids and he only was taking care of the kids. I feel bad for watching that this morning. I didn't know that the man will die so soon but could I really see it in my dream?

People die and I knew how they died, I don't like it, it hurts me. How I wish I knew the time they would die. And that was even more hurting.

As I was watching the TV that morning, all I was thinking was my super power. I was thinking why I had this power in me but there most be a reason why it got to be me.

The question is. Who was going to die next? I don't have the answer to that question, but I know is that I had to stop that death.



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This is a good beginning of a story. It's as though you stopped after getting an idea and then just decided not to finish. A story has an arc: a beginning, a middle and an end. Here you have a conflict introduced, but no follow-up action, and no resolution. Think about that when you write. There is an introduction, a conflict and then resolution of the conflict. Also, we need some character development.

Here is a writing tip from @jayna about creating a story arc.

Thank you!

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Oh thanks for the information, I really appreciate.

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