Choose Your Path
Cole and Joshua were lost in a thick bush. They were looking for a way to get out of the thick bush.
Cole suggested they should go separate ways to look for an exit.
“I think we should go left,” said Cole.
“No, lets go right, because right means a lot.” Said Joshua.
The two friends went separate ways.
Joshua went right, he saw some group of bush men. He was beaten and taken to their home. Joshua later join the bush men. The bush men teach him their ways and Joshua also teach them some things he know. They were all happy with him. The bush men helped Joshua to locate an exit in the thick bush.
Joshua followed the trail the bush men showed him, which he soon found a road out of the thick bush. Joshua was out without getting lost again.
Cole on the other side went left. He found himself in the mist of wild animals. He was brave enough to fight the wild animals. He killed them and eat them as food.
With this, Cole learned to survive in the thick bush. He studied everything in the thick bush.
One day, Cole climbed a tall tree and saw the easiest and smooth road to go out of the thick bush. He followed the road and was finally out of the thick bush.
The two friends were wise, they believed in themselves, which helped them to locate their way out of the thick bush.
Sometimes we decide things and create our own path in life.
wow this is really interesting, sometimes we just have to stand up for our self not to always follow another persons steps. with that we learn life and how to live. thanks for sharing
I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the comments.
There is a saying,be true to yourself. Many people trace this notion to Shakespeare (To thine own self be true), but the idea seems so intrinsically sound that people repeat it often. Your story has that message. Don't follow others. Listen to your own counsel. Tap your own talents. If you do this, your story tells us, then the end will come out fine.
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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
I will do my best to comment on other writers posts.
I love the fact that you take the time to read and evaluate these stories, offering advice. Thanks for all you do here.
An interesting story, precise too.
Story about a need to survive, working together and having one bond. Love for one another is important.
Nice one bro. Keep it up