My zapfic story: digging

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A rare murder case has just been noticed in the family of Don smart. The detectives had arrived and started digging into the matter. The family members are uneasy because each of them has a hand in Don's death and the detectives are ready to discover the culprits.



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Short and full of suspense, what could they have done to Don? No much worries though, the detectives are ready to catch them red handed.

Nice story for the 50 words count, you're good 😉

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Thanks a lot dear! I had to do a lot of brain work you know. !PIZZA

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That's a process every good writer have to go through

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Reminds me of one of Agatha Christie's books, Murder on the Orient Express.

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Really! Never heard of such book but I love gothic novels maybe I'd find it and read.

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What the heck?? Everyone is a culprit? You mean starting from the person who iron the dress he wore that day, the one who cooked, the one who drove him to work, the one who hugged him..... The list is endless 🤣🤣🤣

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Lol! Seriously everyone has a hand as far as wealth is concerned. Hehehe

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This is a mystery! The whole family involved? Seems the detectives will have to arrest them all! 😄 Nicely done!

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Yep! They all need to be arrested. Lol. Thanks for stopping by

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Nice and interesting story but when are we getting the full gist?😂😂 I'm pretty sure the detective will do justice to the case.

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Lol! Of course the detectives are going to do justice but the full gist, hehehe It's gonna be soon okay. Thanks for your beautiful response

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Dig it out Mr detective
There's need for that.
Nice fictional story

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Everything is in suspense... It awakens the curiosity to know what happened. Good work!

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