"Document 13" A Dystopian Tale: Part 24


Welcome to Part 24 of "Document 13", a dystopian graphic novel I'm creating with my daughter. This week: another immortal?

If you want to read the rest first, see the links below the post to catch up.


The year is 2074, the world has been plunged into darkness. One girl, Sarah Doe, will learn the secrets of the dark forces that run the ruined world. With the help of a few friends, her family, and her own powers she will fight to return the world to an order not known since well before her birth. Will she succeed? Read to find out!

If you haven't read the other parts, go back and read them first! (Links are at the bottom).

Scene: Headmistress Matthew’s office. The Immortal Seven are standing around her desk.

HM: You’re sure you killed her? She has survived attempts before.

O3: Killed who? What?

O1: Yes Ma’am, we killed Sarah. She fell into the river and floated away. Sorry, Anya has forgotten. It seems the training wears off on some minds. I managed to stay on task.

HM: Well, I guess the doctor has more work to do. I do appreciate you taking care of the Sarah problem. Lieben.

The girls snap awake.

HM: Now Rachel, take your sisters and tend to the south garden, it could use some weeding.

Rachel(O1): Yes Ma’am.

The girls leave the room. Matthews picks up the phone.

HM: Doctor, they just arrived. The training could use a bit of work, but the objective was met. Two of the girls were even shot and still pulled through. Your little experiment is mostly a success.

I’ll bring them over in a week or so for a few more training days. God knows I need a break from all this Sarah fiasco. I’d also like to be at my healthiest for the transfer, if you still think you can…

Scene: Exterior of a large dome. It resembles a giant greenhouse. It is surrounded by a large valley and the remnants of forests and suburban neighborhoods. The sky is a little less orange than in the city, but still blocks out most of the sunlight. Green plants are scarce in the area.

Scene: Interior of the dome. Most of the land inside is taken up by fields. On the periphery are multi storied buildings used as homes and shops. There are also airlocks spaced evenly around the structure. There is a gathering around one of them. Six of the people are wearing suits.

The group is surrounding a bier with a small body on it. The body is wrapped in a sheet.

Man: We commend her body to the Earth and her spirit to Heaven.

People: Amen.

The group carries the bier towards the airlock.

The body moves.

Woman: Wait!

The six men stop.

Woman: She moved!

The crowd murmurs. The six men lower the bier to the ground.

The body begins to move. Then a voice comes from under the sheet.

Girl: Where am I? Help me!!

She wiggles clear off the bier and to the ground.

One man jumps in with a knife and starts cutting the sheet.

Man: Stay still, little one, I need to cut you out.

He cuts the sheet from around her face and pulls it off of her head.

Woman: It’s a miracle! Praise God!

The crowd begins to cheer and sing.


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Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
Part 13
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
Part 18
Part 19
Part 20
Part 21
Part 22
Part 23

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