You Linger On My Mind
(Edited)
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When I close my eyes
and when my eyes are open
It all feels the same
the thought of you is unwavering
My dreams are surreal
Like the growing ivy on the wall
sweet thoughts about you is rooted in me
your soothing fragrance I wear on my mind
with a calming relief
there are no words left for me to say
as you walk the hallway of my mind
I feel alive
Believe in me when I say
I need you in my life
To warm me up
and in your embrace
I'd love to share in your grace
Don't blame me when I stare at your face
I can't help but think about you
Loving you makes me feel alive
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Awwwwn so sweet
Thank you ❤
You are welcome
What a delightful love poem! You convey warmth and tenderness in your longing for this special and loved person. 😍 Nicely done!
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Thanks for reading
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I really like the opener to this one. It's a little spooky, it's a lot intriguing. Could go in many directions but ends up being a love poem 💖
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Cheers!!
You spotted it .... nice
Thank you
It's beautiful to have someone special and feel everything you write in such beautiful verses.
Thanks for sharing.
Good day.
Thank you