Everything Everything

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Taking you back to the Garden of Eden, when you say Garden of Everything, what could be more better.

My own Garden of Everything lies on my beloved husband, a hardworking man in his late twenties. He has everything I need as a woman, the cute face, sexy packs, and a dark hairy skin that covers his huge thick muscles. He's romantic, kind, caring, he has all qualities.

Speaking of riches, his money flows like river. What is it that I need, I won't get in two seconds. Is it a house in banana island, I have it like two buildings sited in different locations available for rent.
With my husband, I have everything, he is my garden of eden, my garden of everything.

I had happiness, riches, joy, but there is something my garden of everything couldn't give me, “ATTENTION”. My husband hardly have time for me. It's work! work!! work!!!. He works today, tomorrow and even on sunday. He barely gives me attention.
All the romantic dinner we used to have, the hangouts, picnics, etc, is no longer there and I have missed it. Right now, I crave for it.

Looks like my garden of everything is not a what it is after all. We were like that for so long, we started having some different times in terms of relationship.

One day I set my husband up with the therapist my friend recommended. After sometimes with the therapist, my husband changed for good. He became my garden of everything ones again. Finally I had the attention I have always craved for. My garden of everything is now complete.



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What a great title! One essential element was missing from this lovely garden, and in your story the protagonist finds a way to fill that gap. You create a valid story arc. You describe the setting, the motivation of the character and a credible path toward resolution. We are happy, in the end, that the husband understands what truly will make his wife happy.

Thank you for posting this story in the Ink Well community.

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Hello @cryptofi,
It's a clever notion, to compare the happy (almost happy) married life to the Garden of Eden. Without a rich, full relationship, a marriage is not truly a garden, and certainly not an ideal garden. A modern intervention, therapy, is an effective solution to the couple's age-old problem :)

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This is a charming story, @cryptofi. So often it seems like once a divide occurs between two people in a relationship, it is hard for them to find happiness together again, but in this story the couple was able to rekindle the fire!

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