The Secrets Of the Hive Community | #Pob-wotw S3

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images (32).jpegSecrets of the Hive

Faith woke up to find Mark still asleep by her side, they had both had a lot of fun last night with the Hivers ( a community called the Hive which they were now part of ), and it all felt so surreal now that she thought of it.

They bacame part of the Hive Community few months after moving into Lekki, although they had been so reluctant to join them at first, they ended up being drawn to the level of support that was shared amongst each member.

Her friend Amina had been the one who dealt the final convincing blow when she showed them how this small Community of well invested business men and women had helped her frail and crumbling business get back on it's feet. Together they supported each other, the big whales who earned a lot more, helped the little fishes with little tokens that'll encourage them stand on their own feet.

There really was no room for frailty and discord in this Community as every one loved the other and they all worked hand in hand to achieve their goals. Faith was still a little skeptical because it actually felt so unreal, she had never seen such happen anywhere in her country before but Mark had been all hyped and enthusiastic about it so she had to share in his joy.

Last night had been an unforgettable one, it had been a well organized get together by the community owner. There had been a lot of esteemed Hiveans in attendance, they even got to meet great minds like the Korean based Jack Mineopoly and Queen Sam Smithson the great writer. It had really been a glorious celebration, it felt like they were in heaven on earth. The whole hall glowed with gold colors and the users were uniformly dressed, beautiful chandeliers hung on the ceiling and every one was well dressed like royalty.

images (31).jpegThe golden Hall

Well into the event something caught her attention. Faith noticed the maliciously looking woman popularly known as Nkechi eyeing her husband. She could see the flirty demonic smile curl up on her lips while she danced seductively along his line of vision. She wore a red revealing gown that showed off her breasts , short enough that her beautiful laps was clearly seen like the billboard along Lekki toll gate.

When she raised the issue with Mark he just laughed and told her she was seeing things. That statement got her angry but she had to let it go because she didn't want any discord between them that night. Mood already spoiled, she just sat there drinking the red looking stuff they shared at the event, it didn't taste like anything she had ever tasted before but it had this addictive taste to it so she kept on drinking.

She couldn't really recall what happened after that and the whole thing was still very fuzzy in her mind, she could remember a little of dancing heartily on the dance floor with her husband and she certainly didn't even know how they both even made it home. Last thing she could remember was taking a last sip off a glass containing that red substance before passing out.

Her head was aching so badly right now, and she needed a pain killer really badly. She could still hear the peaceful breathing of Mark as he was still covered up on the bed and a smiled curled up around her lips. After looking at him for a while, she walked towards the kitchen, she felt a little frail, and it seemed as if her legs couldn't carry her. It must be from all the drinking and excessive dancing.

She walked into the kitchen, opened the fridge and took out a bottle of really chilled water, took a lengthy drink from it and let out a sigh. She noticed something red on the back of her hand as she dropped the bottle on the kitchen table. Wait, it wasn't just on her hand, it was all over her dress!!

She froze and her blood immediately went dry, what was this strange red substance that had covered her up. Her heart began to beat faster as fear engulfed her. She ran straight to the mirror along the hallway to get a good look at herself, what she saw was horrific!!. Clearly
someone was playing games with her, this wasn't a funny prank. All the skin on her face had been scraped off like an artist artwork, revealing all the bones on her face. Felt like something from a horror movie, she looked like a living dead but what baffled her was why she she was still alive and couldn't feel any pain.

She ran screaming into the room where her husband was lying and immediately removed the covers from his body. If what she saw earlier was horrific, this was way worse. Her husband's body lay there, his chest and his ribs had been scraped open and she could see the insides of his body revealing his heart beating slowly, there was blood all over the bed.

Nausea enveloped her and she couldn't even let out a scream, she was hopeless, afraid and wished she was dead. It felt like the ground was going to open up and swallow her. Tears fill her her eyes as she....

Honey, wake up! It's time to go jogging, you're the one who's always talking about how much we've added in just few months.

He leaned over and kissed her on the cheek, she opened her eyes to see the most handsome face she'd ever know. At that moment she realized that it had only been a dream.

Thank you for reading this piece, I hope you didn't see horrific images in your head, 😂.


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It had better be a dream lol...you got me too... Could not wait to read to the end to know how everything happened then I realized it was all a dream...lol
Well done champ

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Haha, it wasn't actually a dream for me at first, but when I got to the end something just told me to add a little twist and mess with the reader's mind a bit.

Thank you for reading!!!

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That was a nice twist. Good one. It has been a while has i last wrote a short story, maybe i will give it a short this week. Cheers.

And by the way, tell faith to stop drinking to much...


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Ohh my, I'm looking forward to reading your story. But please go easy on us.

Lol, I will, if she'll even listen to me.

How's your day going?

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Lol... How on Earth did Faith put that type of nightmare in her head. I guess alcohol is stronger than we can imagine. It messes with people's mind in a way that is beyond logical comprehension 😂.

Now, you gave alot of branch to this story, but the summary is that it's a good one. Well Done Bro.

Moved this to @dreemport

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Yes of course, alcohol is way stronger than we can imagine, I wonder what she was thinking about before sleeping..

Thanks a lot bro for the lovely comment.
Thanks for sharing too ❤️

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Hahah... She was probably still thinking of the well packed lady that was showing off in from of her husband. Hehe.


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Hahah... She was probably still thinking of the well packed lady that was showing off in from of her husband. Hehe.

I guess so, haha...must have been her work all along In the dream. She surely would enjoy doing that.

Did you know that images from Google are not acceptable on Hive?

They are not free to use so, using it in our contents only means that we are joining in the infringement of copyright. Which of course is an offence.

I actually know and try to provide a source to those pictures but to be on a safe side I'll check out those websites you just recommended.

Thank you again for the continuous support.

How has your time in this new place been after relocating??

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Lol, your story is hauntingly captivating! You are great at fiction writing obviously. I like how you subtly ingrained the four pob words into your story. Very creative and good! Nicely done. Found my way here via @dreemport. Keep hiving! 😊

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Ha, you flatter me too much!!
I'm still trying to get the hang of this whole writing thing that's why I greatly look up to you. I hope to learn more with time.

I like how you subtly ingrained the four pob words into your story

Thanks a lot dear, I'm glad it came out really well.

Thanks again for reading this ❤️

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I was into it, actually wondering what happened until you said it was a dream 😆
You got me.

Found your post via @dreemport

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Lol, I hope I didn't get you all freaked out..
I hope I got you to stay, lol.

@dreemport you're my lucky charm, thank you @kenechukwu97 once again

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Hahaha... You gave us a hot one and I'm pretty sure that they enjoyed the reading each line.

Nice reading that from you. Well Done Bro

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Well, I just hope I didn't burn anyone with this hot one, haha 😂.

Thanks 😊

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🤨🤨 You see that look on my face? That's a face saying "You're lucky it was a dream" 😂 oh my goodness! I think I felt my heart almost jumping out of my chest when you described how faith looked like on the mirror 😭🤣

This is a really good story, like so good and I noticed the use of some unique words like Hive, discord, frailty and then the names of @mineopoly and Sam... That is really so cool 😎

Nicely written, I got here through @dreemport and I'm so glad I did 😊

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🤨🤨 You see that look on my face? That's a face saying "You're lucky it was a dream" 😂 oh my goodness! I think I felt my heart almost jumping out of my chest when you described how faith looked like on the mirror 😭🤣

😂😂😂😂..I am indeed very lucky, I wonder what you would have done to me with a face like that,ha. Lol, I didn't want your heart leaving your chest so I put it back in place.

This is a really good story, like so good and I noticed the use of some unique words like Hive, discord, frailty and then the names of @mineopoly and Sam... That is really so cool 😎

I see you really took your time to read through. You caught me there, haha.

Nicely written, I got here through @dreemport and I'm so glad I did 😊

Thanks for coming my dear, you actually put a smile on my face with your comment.
Thank you ❤️❤️

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And @merit.ahama is smiling also 🙈😂 how did you do that? I made an attractive comment on your post and you won that over with your most attractive reply 🤣

You're welcome by the way 😊

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And @merit.ahama is smiling also 🙈😂 how did you do that? I made an attractive comment on your post and you won that over with your most attractive reply 🤣

I'll give you a hint on how I did that if you smile again 😏, haha. Guess we're..no guesses.. we're both attractive people!

You're welcome by the way 😊

You too dear

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😂 And I smiled again, thanks anyways
Lemme run before I smile for a living here 🤣

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😂😂😂..you deserve to smile always. I'll also stop here so no one would think I'm trying to toast you (like we Nigerians put it).

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Why you wanna go freakin me out @chincoculbert?🤣 Very imaginative story. Not sure whether I should be flattered or terrified that visions of myself and @mineopoly would lead into such a horrific nightmare😂What did you make of that @mineopoly? 😝 and you flatter me too much ha ha. I'm far from a queen lol Just a regular person who is passionate about writing and connecting with people. You never cease to surprise me with your writing though. I came to your post via @dreemport. Good luck in the WOTW finale btw😎

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Why you wanna go freakin me out @chincoculbert?🤣 Very imaginative story. Not sure whether I should be flattered or terrified that visions of myself and @mineopoly would lead into such a horrific nightmare😂

I'm sorry if I made you see such a frightening picture in your head, haha. but you atleast got to see the picture. Well I dunno, it's quite let to sometimes interesting so I'll love to hear what @mineopoly would think.

and you flatter me too much ha ha. I'm far from a queen lol Just a regular person who is passionate about writing and connecting with people. You never cease to surprise me with your writing though.

You're far from normal, after reading your Alive post I got finally sure. You're blessed, you're favoured, you're alive, you're a queen, you're @samsmith1971 , the most amazing writer I know. As for me surprising you, I wish I could really do more, it'll be a great dream come true to reach the stages of you and Mineopoly, I still have a long way to go.

Goodluck too dear, have a great day

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Keep writing regularly and you will be surprised at how words become your best friends😍

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That..I will do.
There's nothing to loose..
Thank you 😊

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